Such a beautiful building you once were
Host to many a party
Home to many a family
I must remind myself
Don't dwell on what has passed away
You were not all perfection
Host to many a tragedy
Home to many a sufferer
I must remind myself
There is a crack, a crack in everything
Disrupting the very foundation of existence
That's how the light gets in
Illuminating space for transformation
W3 Prompt #69: Wea’ve Written Weekly poet of the week Ange, prompts us to write a poem using two to three lines from Leonard Cohen’s (1934 – 2016) ‘Anthem’.
I chose:
“Don’t dwell on what has passed away…
There is a crack, a crack in everything…
That’s how the light gets in”
Beautifully written Jennifer
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Sadje! 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re welcome
LikeLike
🙌
LikeLiked by 1 person
Profound and beautifully put.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you!😊
LikeLike
This is excellent, Jenn. Is it a real building or a fictional one?
Much love,
David
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, David! Fictional – the photo is part of an old hotel, but I don’t have any connection to it.
LikeLiked by 1 person
you have quite an imagination❣️
LikeLiked by 1 person
hi, Jenn ❤
Just wanna let you know that this weeks W3, hosted by the lovely Elizabeth of 'Tea and Paper' is now live:
Enjoy!
Much love,
David
LikeLiked by 1 person
Excellent use of the lines! Seamless even!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you! 😊
LikeLike
You used the lines so well Jennifer❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, AJ! 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
Seamless writing—not a crack to me seen! 😁🌹
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Lesley! 😊
LikeLike