Motion slow in a desperate run
Notion I’ve been here before
Ocean flows from subconscious stream
Emotion spills onto shore
Look for meaning in recurrent dream
Books and blogs are inconsistent
Good luck, omens, polar extremes
Outlook for answers is nonexistent
Thank you Melissa Lemay for selecting me as this week’s PoW for W3!
This is my poem in response to my own prompt for W3 Prompt #81: Wea’ve Written Weekly.
write a “lento”on the topic of dreams
- Two quatrains (four-line stanzas) with a fixed rhyme scheme of abcb, defe, as the 2nd and 4th lines of each stanza must rhyme;
- All the FIRST words of each verse should rhyme;
Thank you David for this fun and challenging weekly prompt showcasing different writers and styles!
Beautiful poem! I loved it! ❤
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Thank you!😊
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Recurrent dreams are rare but you have captured all the thoughts about them that I have when I do experience this….
Was such a different prompt and the rhyme at start as well as end lines was a new one for me, but thank you for a new form to try – and totally love yours
💞Suzanne
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Thank you so much! 😊
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Love the rhymes you chose for this, lovely 💕
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Thank you! 😊
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Oh so well written Jennifer
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Thank you, Sadje! 😊
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You’re welcome
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Unpacking a dream is a dream in itself! Nice write.
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Thank you!😊
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You’re welcome.
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Wow, Jenn… it’s a good thing for the rest of us that you can’t select yourself as PoW for this coming week! Well done! ❤
~David
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Haha! Thank you, David. 😊
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hi, Jenn,
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3 prompt, hosted by the lovely and wonderful Sarah David, is now live!
Enjoy! ❤
Much love,
David
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Motion slow in a desperate run
I love your lento, JJJ ! ❤️so true.
Thank you for this new (to me) poetry form prompt. 🙏💗
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Thank you, Lesley! Glad you like the lento form. It was new for me too!
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