With all her love she so adores
In exchange
His love is feigned
He appears to be onboard
His behavior quite untoward
Her reputation stained
He remains “unchained”
Despite her love forth poured
Unrequited love turns to hate
Obsessive thoughts of retribution
He is oblivious to her disdain
Determined to seal his fate
He offers her no solution
She reciprocates the pain
W3 Prompt #109: Wea’ve Written Weekly poet of the week, Mich, prompts us to compose a modified Italian sonnet on the theme of unrequited love.
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A beautiful poem! 🤩😍🤩💖💖💖
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Thank you, Carol Anne! 😊
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“Unrequited love turns to hate” This had me gripping harder on my seat. It is so unfortunate when one cannot accept defeat, especially in love.
well done👏👏👏 thank you for joining the fun
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Thank you, Mich! 😊
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Yes! This poem really elicited an emotional reaction from me! I was cringing…
~David
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Glad to know it was stirring. Thank you, David! 😊
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What a great poem! That ambiguous ending: gorgeous!!
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Thank you!😊
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wow I love this
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Thank you, Matt!😊
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Any time
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Love and hate can be closely intertwined. (K)
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Yes! ☯️
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There’s a lot of story within these 14 lines! (Thinking it doesn’t end well)
But well done here!
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Thank you!😊
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Wonderful stylish drama. 👏❤️
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Thank you, Lesley!😊
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Jennifer the anger rolls of these words like a tide! Wow~
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Thank you, Val! 😊
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A compelling sonnet. Yes, it can lead to anger and hatred.✍🏾🖤
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Thank you!😊
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Hi, Jenn 👋🏻
This week’s W3, hosted by the amazing D. Avery, is now live! 💝
https://skepticskaddish.com/2024/06/05/w3-prompt-110-weave-written-weekly/
Much love,
David
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Uh-oh!
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