It is rare that I cry
but you make my tears
fall hard
from clouds that form
behind my eyes
they pour over cliffs
run down streams
tumble over rocks
pool into lakes
flow over dams
rush down rivers
tumble into the sea
rise with the waves
fall to the shore
rest in the place
where I fell for you
W3 Prompt #124: Wea’ve Written Weekly poet of the week, Lynn, prompts us to: “Compose a ‘list poem’, which includes the word ‘fall’ or some form of it…”.
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This is so moving Jennifer
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Thank you, Sadje! 😊
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Most welcome
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A wonderfully evocative list poem…thanks for participating, Jennifer!
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Thank you, Lynn! 😊
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I adore this…! wonderful … I fell every line with you …
💞Suzanne
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Thank you, Suzanne! 😊
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I like how this is bookended by falling. (K)
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Thank you, Kerfe! 😊
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Jennifer this poem has so much movement that I was amazed! I love your list poem❣❣❣ 😍
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Thank you, Val! 😊
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Beautiful take!
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Thank you, Sarah! 😊
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Jenn, your poem masterfully transforms the depth of emotion into a powerful, flowing journey, capturing the profound impact of love with vivid and evocative imagery.
~David
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Thank you, David! 😊
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hi, Jenn! 👋🏻
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3—hosted by our wonderful Sarah Whiley for the first time—is now live:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2024/09/18/w3-prompt-125-weave-written-weekly/
Enjoy❣️
Much love,
David
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this is lovely jennifer, it is so good! ❤
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Thank you, Carol Anne! 😊
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