
I sense your uncertainty
Threatening am I?
My shadows cast at your feet
Warning not to enter
Perhaps a change of perspective is needed
For my branches offer shelter
from the true horrors of the world
and wisdom lurks in the silence
Yes, take a step…
Follow the path I have created
See how beams of light shine upon hidden doors
Each there for you to open
Yes, open a door…
Tell me, what do you see?
W3 Prompt #128: Wea’ve Written Weekly poet of the week, Jaideep, prompts us to write an ekphrastic poem of 14 lines utilizing personification, while evoking a sense of mystery and passage of time.
So well written Jennifer
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Thank you, Sadje! 😊
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wonderful Jennifer! ❤
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Thank you, Carol Anne! 😊
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“Yes, open a door…
Tell me, what do you see?”
Beautiful and mysterious. 🙂
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Thank you! 😊
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So full of intrigue and beautifully penned, Jennifer. Wonderful pairing of your poem and the image.
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Thank you, Eugi! 😊
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I love the sense of mystery you create!
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Thank you! 😊
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We’ve been watching a lot of Star Wars. Yoda immediately came to mind when I read the second line. Maybe all the green helped, too.
I love the idea of something perceived as a threat only because it is unknown, offering untold wisdom.
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Thank you, Melissa! 😊
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This poem envelops the reader in the atmosphere of the woods. Very enticing!
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Thank you, Val! 😊
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I love the mysterious and potentially ominous tone… is the narrator being genuine, or is it a fae trick?
Well written, Jennifer!
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Thank you, Nicole! 😊
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Your narrator had enticed me in. I can’t wait to see what is behind the door.
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Thank you, Heather! 😊
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You’re welcome.
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Yes! Go on, JJJ, and open a door… 💚🌳
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😊
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A wonderful take, Jennifer. I enjoyed it.💜
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Thank you, Jude! 😊
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The poem is intriguing and thought-provoking.
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Thank you!😊
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Jenn, it’s like you’ve invited us into a world of introspection and discovery, where every line feels like a gentle nudge to explore the hidden wisdom behind each door.
~David
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Thank you, David! 😊
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*hug*
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hi, Jenn 👋🏻
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3 prompt, hosted for the very first time by our friend Carol Anne, is now live:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2024/10/16/w3-prompt-129-weave-written-weekly/
Enjoy❣️
Much love,
David
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“wisdom lurks in the silence ” I love that, Jennifer!
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Thank you! 😊
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