A bench with a perfect view
Overlooks the water blue
Perchance some dolphins will swim by
Or a pod of pelicans on the fly
A giant yacht with decks galore
A sailboat sailing off to explore
Rainbows arcing overhead
Perhaps some shooting stars instead
But I choose best not to go there
On a different bench I sit where
I can view the bench with the waterfront
As sitting there’s sure to be disappointment
W3 Prompt #153: Wea’ve Written Weekly poet of the week, Lesley, prompts us to write a monologue from a bench.
Xingfumama’s Pull up a Seat Photo Challenge, week 13.
Very nice take
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Thank you, Sadje! 😊
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Clever twist there in the end.
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Thank you, Violet! 😊
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Great poem, Jennifer!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
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Thank you, Yvette! 😊
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That last line is priceless!
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Thank you, Nolcha! 😊
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Jen there have been so many wonderful takes on this challenge – good one!!
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Thank you, Val! 😊
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The water is so blue.
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Jenn, this is such a beautifully reflective piece. I love how it shifts from hopeful imagery to the quiet realization of contentment elsewhere.
~David
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Thank you, David! 😊
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Loved it Jennifer and that seat, I would sit there and day dream as well 😀
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Thank you, Brian! 😊
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Love this view!
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Thank you, Amy! 😊
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I love the rhythm and your couplets in your reflective monologue, JJJ. The scene of dolphins, yachts and rainbows creates an enchanting backdrop to your poem. I enjoyed your understated clever conclusion choosing to focus on the bench from the perspective of distance. ‘Tis an inventive and lovely poem. 🐬
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Thank you, Lesley! 😊
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🙏 🩷
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hi, Jenn 💛
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by the brilliant Violet Lentz, is now live:
Enjoy❣️
Much love,
David
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