An island
Detached, disconnected, isolated
Gently trespassed upon by tentative feet
Caressed by passing winds
Enchanted by the dazzling Milky Way
A bit-o-honey for the undernourished soul
Tenuous waters
Lap against my shore
Greet, retreat, abandon
An island
Am I
W3 Prompt #169: Wea’ve Written Weekly poet of the week, Lesley, prompts us to write, literally or metaphorically, on the theme of “The Deserted Island” or “The Fantasy Castle”.
dVerse Poetics host Lillian challenges us to incorporate one or more listed candy brands into our poem.
A great two-fer!
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Thank you, Val! 😊
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You’re welcome!!
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Love how you connected both prompts 🙌
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Thank you, AJ! 😊
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I never wanted to leave this island you wrote so beautifully about … spectacular image and poem.
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Thank you, Helen! 😊
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LOVE this….like Helen, I wanted to be there on this island! And then . . . I am the island! This reminds me of the idea that we can be alone without being lonely. In fact, some times it is a blessing to be an island!
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Thank you, Lillian! 😊
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As Donne said “no one is an island”….
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😊
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I like the combination of two prompts. Nicely done.
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Thank you! 😊
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What exquisite imagery! Your island metaphor transforms isolation into something almost sacred. The gentle rhythm and evocative phrases like ‘bit-o-honey for the undernourished soul’ create genuine emotional depth.
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Thank you, Bob! 😊
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Nicely done! Now I want something sweet
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Thank you, Christine! 😊
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Jenn, this feels so tender and introspective. “A bit-o-honey for the undernourished soul” especially lingers with me—it’s such a gentle image of quiet yearning and healing.
~David
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Thank you, David! 😊
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*hug*
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JJJ, your poem is beautifully succinct—a gentle and luminous expression of the ‘I am.’ 🌴💗 👏
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Thank you, Lesley! 😊
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🤗
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So well done even the names of candy bars couldn’t distract me! Lovely!
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Thank you, Violet! 😊
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hi, Jenn 💗
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our amazing Dennis, is now live:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2025/07/30/w3-prompt-170-weave-written-weekly/
Enjoy❣️
Much love,
David
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Sometimes it’s good to be an island.
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Yes! 😊
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