Romantic love:
Two
A tangle
Wrapped in now
Familial love:
Brood
Tough work
Held with joy
Self love:
I
Choose me
Faults and all
Unrequited love:
You
Want me
To part ways
Enduring/Timeless Love:
Here
Us two
For all time
W3 Prompt #179: Wea’ve Written Weekly poet of the week, Michelle, prompts is to write a Hay(na)ku series on the theme of love.
Excellent take!
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Thank you, Reena! 😊
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Beautiful poems Jennifer
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Thank you, Sadje! 😊
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You’re welcome my friend
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Lovely chain.
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Thank you, Violet! 😊
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Powerful!
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Thank you, Nolcha! 😊
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This is written so well!
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Thank you, Christine! 😊
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lovely.
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Thank you, Nicole! 😊
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Beautiful! 🌞
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Thank you, Gwen! 😊
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Jen, these are so beautifully done – they take my breath away!!
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Thank you, Val! 😊
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Beautiful! The self love one is wonderful!
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Thank you! 😊
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Lovely Jen, especially the ‘self-love’ 💕
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Thank you, Ange! 😊
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Beautiful conclusion:
“Here
Us two
For all time”.
love it!
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Thank you! 😊
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nice take; i enjoyed the read
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Thank you, Artie! 😊
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Brood is a fabulous double meaning for familial love! Very clever. The stanza for romantic love is spot on too. 👏
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Thank you, Shaun! 😊
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Jen, I love how each verse stands strong on its own—“Two / A tangle / Wrapped in now” especially captures that spark so well.
~David
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Thank you, David! 😊
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*hug*
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These are stunning Haynaku poems 🫶
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Thank you, Mich! 😊
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Beautifully done, JJJ 👏❤️
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Thank you, Lesley! 😊
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hi, Jen❣️
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Reena, is now live:
W3 Prompt #180
Much love,
David
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