Drifting and surging
Transitory as the sea
Always in motion
Like the ebbing tide
Consistently retreating
Compelled to return
Prompted by Colleen’s #TankaTuesday Weekly #Poetry Challenge, Synonyms Only: No. 331, 8/1/23.
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Drifting and surging
Transitory as the sea
Always in motion
Like the ebbing tide
Consistently retreating
Compelled to return
Prompted by Colleen’s #TankaTuesday Weekly #Poetry Challenge, Synonyms Only: No. 331, 8/1/23.
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Beautifully written
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Thank you, Sadje! 😊
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You’re most welcome
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Beautiful ebb and flow 💜
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Thank you! 😊
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Great poem, Jennifer! I love your last two lines!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
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Thank you!😊
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I like the open-ended meaning of these poems… I’ve know people who fit this description so well.
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Thank you! 😊
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You’re welcome.
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Wonderful movement. 😊
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Thank you! 🙂
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