
Perpetual lunar and solar tag
One retreats
The other gives chase
Enchanting the sky
W3 Prompt #86: Wea’ve Written Weekly’s poet of the week, Reena, prompts us to write a Naani.
“Naani is one of India’s most popular Telugu poems. Naani means an expression of one and all. It consists of 4 lines, consisting of 20 to 25 syllables. This form is not bound to a particular subject.”
Nice 👌
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Thank you!😘
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Lovely Jennifer
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Thank you, Sadje!😊
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You’re welcome
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And this ‘catch me if you can’ game has been going on for how many billion years? 😉
Great description of this lovely picture!
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Excellent
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Lovely!
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Thank you!😊
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Jenn, your Naani poem dances with the celestial, beautifully portraying the perpetual game of lunar and solar tag. The imagery of one retreating while the other gives chase creates a captivating cosmic ballet. The enchantment of the sky is vividly expressed in these concise lines.
~David
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Thank you, David!😊
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Hi, Jenn ❤
Just wanna let you know that this week's W3, hosted by the delightful Lorraine Lewis, is now live:
Much love,
David
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Your poem is lovely, indeed an enchanted sky!
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Thank you!😊
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Perhaps, the sky is enchanted every day.
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The sun and moon playing tag! Brilliant description!! ❤
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Thank you! 😊
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