Dawn and Dusk

Image provided by Reena Saxena
Perpetual lunar and solar tag
One retreats
The other gives chase
Enchanting the sky

W3 Prompt #86: Wea’ve Written Weekly’s poet of the week, Reena, prompts us to write a Naani.

“Naani is one of India’s most popular Telugu poems. Naani means an expression of one and all. It consists of 4 lines, consisting of 20 to 25 syllables. This form is not bound to a particular subject.”

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17 thoughts on “Dawn and Dusk

  1. Jenn, your Naani poem dances with the celestial, beautifully portraying the perpetual game of lunar and solar tag. The imagery of one retreating while the other gives chase creates a captivating cosmic ballet. The enchantment of the sky is vividly expressed in these concise lines.

    ~David

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