She stares into her bathroom mirror, a smug smile upon her face. She did it! She revealed herself to her lover’s wife during the celebration of their twentieth wedding anniversary. A posh restaurant, a shared bottle of champagne, live piano music… Perfect, except for the unexpected guest. She giggles at the recent memory. He and his wife, sitting at an intimate little table in the corner, deep in whispered conversation. His crumbling facade as he witnesses her approach. Her smile falters a bit recalling the cold expression in the wife’s eyes. No matter, he will be all hers now. Her smile broadens.
But that smile was the last smile to come upon her face. Awaiting his arrival, she turns on the television for distraction. A breaking news story publicizes her lover’s portrait, murdered outside a trendy restaurant. A manhunt underway for the suspected murderer.
dVerse Prosery — January 15, hosted by Lisa (msjadeli)
Lisa prompts us to write a piece of prose up to 144 words, incorporating the line: “But that smile was the last smile to come upon her face.” A line from the heart-wrenching Ballad of Birmingham by Dudley Randall.
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Beautiful post ✍️
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Thank you!😊
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Welcome 🙏 freinds
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A chilling tale. Good for the wife, I mean “murderer!”
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😁 Thank you!
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Fabulous story! I enjoyed this, Lisa.
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Thank you! 😊
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Oh, Jennifer, I’m sorry. Wrong name. This was a fabulous story! xx
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No worries. Thanks, Colleen!
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Hmm… that is what happens ..
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When playing foolish games 😏
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Oh! Quite an unexpected twist
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Thank you, Sadje! Glad it wasn’t too predictable. 😊
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No it wasn’t
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Such a great twist to the story Jenifer 🙌
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Thank you, AJ! 😊
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Such a well-written thriller. You worked the line in seamlessly. Extreme actions beget extreme responses. How horrible to see her lover’s pic on the TV as a murder victim!
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Thank you, Lisa! 😊
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You’re welcome 🙂
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That was completely unexpected! I love the way you built it up, from one point of view, and the adjectives used to influence the reader’s opinion: smug, posh, unexpected, intimate, recent, whispered, crumbling, and especially the ‘cold expression in the wife’s eye’.
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Thank you, Kim!😊
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My pleasure!
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Oh Wow! You captured my attention from line one! A great write!!!
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Thank you, Helen! 😊
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Oh, the drama. I loved it.
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Thank you!😊
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Awesome piece of flash fiction! Well done! ❤
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Thank you, Carol Anne! 😊
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