Thoughts swirl aimlessly
Arise out of mist
Wrestle under the surface
Drag into the abyss
Mute sensory perception
Distort reality
Breathe in
Breathe out
A moment of reprieve granted
Freeing the mind
Just long enough
To find the car keys
Rogue Thoughts
JJJ Interactive Books 
That last line brings us back into reality Jennifer. A wonderful take. Thanks for joining in.
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Thank you, Sadje!😊
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You’re most welcome
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I started feeling relaxed with your poem and then ended up laughing. Love it well done.
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Thank you! 😊
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Ultimately yes, just a thought only. lol 😊 Thanks.
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😁 Thank you!
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Jenn, this is truly evocative and relatable… it captures the chaotic nature of the mind and the fleeting moments of clarity amidst the chaos! Excellent.
~David
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Thank you, David!😊
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I lose my keys all the time. It’s ridiculous. I got a lanyard to put them on and keep them around my neck when I’m out. Or hang them up when I get home. I still lose them.
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It can be a laugh at yourself moment, but it’s not funny when you are in a rush and can’t find them.
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A wonderful poem, felt it deeply! ❤
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Thank you! 😊
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