See the snowy egret upon the water dancing
Its tufts of plumage sway in the breeze
Water dancing ballerina in a tutu of white
Graceful movements quite entrancing
Tiptoeing through the surf with ease
Observe the water dancing bird
As it will soon lift its wings and take flight
Leaving but a ring of water stirred
W3 Prompt #93: Wea’ve Written Weekly’s poet of the week, Kerfe, prompts us to write a “san san” on the theme of dancing:
The “san san” poetic form has three requirements:
- Eight lines;
- Rhyming: a-b-c-a-b-d-c-d;
- Repetition: Three terms or images in the verse must be repeated 3x each.



Jenn, I really, really like how you’ve depicted the snowy egret’s graceful movements… That’s so beautiful. I can practically see the bird’s elegance and fluidity ❤
~David
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Thank you, David!😊
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Jenn, hi! 👋🏻
This week’s W3, hosted by our wonderful Sally, is now live:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2024/02/14/w3-prompt-94-weave-written-weekly/
Enjoy!
Much love,
David
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Jenn,
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by the wonderful Heather (Sgeoil) is now live!
https://skepticskaddish.com/2024/02/21/w3-prompt-95-weave-written-weekly/
Enjoy!
Much love,
David
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This is so beautiful Jennifer, thank you
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Thank you! 😊
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Nice captures. Egrets are always fun to watch
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Thank you! Yes, love them.
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Nice take, thanks.
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Thank you!😊
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An egret does resemble a ballerina. Which ballet inspired your poem? (K)
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The bird inspired my poem. It looked like it was dancing. Thanks!
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Great work with the form and the vision of your dancing bird!
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Thank you!😊
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I like your take on the prompt!
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Thank you!😊
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You’re welcome.
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I love the image in the last line.
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Thank you!😊
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Magical photos! What beautiful birds. I love how you invite us to watch the egret dance on the water, and I love the peaceful image you leave us with.❤️
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Thank you, Melissa! 😊
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Gorgeous! Wonderful san san too! 😀
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Thank you! 😊
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