On a lone flower
The first butterfly of spring
Drinks with great fervor
Laughing mountains discover
Colorful rainbows
March winds stir dandelions
Rooted in spring mud
Wintering insects take flight
After long winter slumber
Spring at last
Mortals sing with joy
Songs of hope
Colleen’s 24 Seasons Syllabic Poetry Challenge, No. 24, 3/5/24
dVerse Quadrille #196 – Let’s have a Slumber Party! hosted by Punam.
“Laughing mountains discover” love this line!🏔️
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Thank you, Melissa! 😊
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This is so full of joy!
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Thank you! 😊
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😊
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The joyfulness is so palpable! Thanks for joining in, Jennifer.
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Thank you, Punam!😊
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You are welcome. 😊
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From the tiny insects to the humans….we celebrate Spring! I like this.
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Thank you!😊
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I will feel the same when spring is really here.
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Hopefully it won’t be much longer🌷
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Your piece brings on such joy and promise.
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Thank you, Eugi!
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You’re welcome, Jennifer.
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“First butterfly of spring” – that conjures up so much! Your poem has me smiling by babbling brooks.
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. 😊
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I can feel smiles in the words – lovely
💞Suzanne
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Thank you, Suzanne!😊
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I really like how your seasonal motifs and evocative language create such a rich tapestry of nature’s awakening ❤
~David
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Thank you, David!😊
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How wonderful that you saw your first butterfly. I think they are a long way off, but I’ll be on the lookout now. You did a great job using all the kigo words.
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Thank you, Marsha!😊
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You’re welcome!
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Beautiful! Your poetry make me happy and excited for spring.
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Thank you! Glad it brought you some joy.😊
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Love the ending tercet. I am looking forward to the spring season.
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Thank you, Grace!😊
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The universal appeal of spring.
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Time of new beginnings.
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This poem is just gorgeous! ❤ beautiful imagery of the butterfly drinking xo
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Thank you, Carol Anne!😊
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Oh so beautiful, JJJ 🦋 🌺
Btw. your books are amazing! I wish my boys were that age again.
Your work is wonderful. ❤️
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Thank you so much Lesley! I wish my illustrations were half as good as your digital art.
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You are kidding? Your art has your own very special style and charm. I love your artwork. 🥰
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Thank you, Lesley! ❤️
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