Dew droplets shiver
in response to rising sun
as each fade away
dVerse Tuesday Poetics: Endings hosted by Kim
Week 37: “White Dew” by Mark S.
Dew Droplets
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Books and Poetry
Dew droplets shiver
in response to rising sun
as each fade away
dVerse Tuesday Poetics: Endings hosted by Kim
Week 37: “White Dew” by Mark S.
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Beautiful 🌹
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Thank you!😊
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I love this ending in a beginning, Jennifer, and how you’ve captured it in a haiku. I especially love the contrast in sound between the alliterative ‘dew droplets’ and ‘shiver’.
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Thank you, Kim!😊
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You’re most welcome!
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Compared to a flower blossom, we live forever. Nicely done, Jennifer.
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Thank you, Lisa! 😊
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You’re welcome 🙂
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fading away… wonderful
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Thank you, Björn! 😊
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Hi Jennifer, This is a wonderful haiku! I like the sense of movement in the lines. Very nice.
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Thank you, Mark! 😊
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