
Indian summer
Conquered by winter’s resolve
I sit quietly
Wrapped in a woolen blanket
While waves crash upon the shore
I rise from my perch
A final walk on the beach
Left behind till spring
Lone cold feet imprint the sand
Gulls cry lamentful goodbyes
I pass through sand dunes
Past sparkling freshwater ponds
Wild geese preen feathers
Indifferent to the chill
While I shiver in protest
W3 Prompt #80: Wea’ve Written Weekly’s poet of the week Melissa prompts us to:
- Compose a series of three tanka;
- Following are three “turn lines” or “pivots” (third lines) for each of three tanka, and you must construct the rest:
- Turn / Pivot for tanka #1: “I sit quietly”
- Turn / Pivot for tanka #2: “Left behind till spring”
- Turn / Pivot for tanka #3: “Wild geese preen feathers”
- These tanka are to be autumn/winter-themed;
- You may write each of your tanka in a single unbroken line of thirty-one syllables, or you may use the five-line 5/7/5/7/7 approach.
- Following are three “turn lines” or “pivots” (third lines) for each of three tanka, and you must construct the rest:















