On the tracks our love was revived;
a private compartment;
for two.
The train, it seems, served to provide
ambience for ardent
pursuit.
Diligent planning we had made;
for a trip producing
landscape.
The scenery would be betrayed
by the train’s seducing
escape.
Wea’ve Written Weekly poet of the week, Destiny, prompts us to write a “momento.”
A ‘memento’ is a poem about a holiday or an anniversary, consisting of two stanzas. Each of the two stanzas is:
- Six lines;
- Syllabic: 8-6-2-8-6-2;
- Rhyming: a/b/c/a/b/c.
Sounds like a perfect little romantic get-away!
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Highly recommended 🙂
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How fun and sexy! A lovely poem, Jennifer!
❤
David
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🙂
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Jennifer ❤
Just wanna let you know that this week's W3, hosted by l'il ol' me, is now live:
Enjoy!
Much love,
David
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Woohoo on the choo-choo 💖
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Lol 😂
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😁
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