I shiver in the cold Autumn air. It is Sunday morning and I am awaiting the train at a quiet station surrounded by forest. I’m on the outskirts of Berlin heading to Prague. A few deep breaths of fresh, cool air as I gaze over the empty tracks shrouded in mist. The train approaches and the chaos of urban life resumes.
Autumn air chilling
Warm train appearing through mist
Doors seal out silence
A beautiful haibun
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Lovely. I could see this scene play out in my mind. Good use of the kigo words.
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Thank you, Colleen😊
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You’re so welcome.
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Beautiful. I love how you created mood.
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You are welcome!
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I enjoyed your haibun…something bleak about trains and Eastern Europe.
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Thank you! I wouldn’t want to do it everyday…. Especially this time of year 😊
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Beautiful haibun. I felt like I was waiting for the train.
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Wonderful haibun. Your strong images delight the senses. 😊
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Beautifully done, very Autumnal 💜 💜
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Wonderful images. The photo is great too
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Well captured in all respects.
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