
Eyes observe
From trees newly green
Vast landscape
Earthbound one
Coveting its vantage point
Wishes she could fly

A shadorma written for Colleen’s 24 Seasons Syllabic Poetry Challenge, No. 33. “Shadorma consists of a six-line stanza (or sestet). Each stanza is written as 3-5-3-3-7-5.”
Very nice photos. That is one of the few north American birds that I recognize. Thanks.
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Thank you! 😊
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Beautiful shadorma, Jennifer. 🌞
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Thank you, Gwen!😊
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Jennifer, I’ve been loving your bird poetry. What sweet bird is this? I love the subtle coloring!
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Thank you, Colleen! It’s an eastern phoebe.
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What a beauty! Thanks for the name.
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Jennifer, just one day would be nice 🙂
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It sure would! 😊
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i love the way you express the feeling of wanting to be as free as a bird ….a feeling we all experience💜💜
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Thank you, Willow!😊
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A pleasure 💜
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