Vantage Point

Eastern Phoebe
Eyes observe
From trees newly green
Vast landscape
Earthbound one
Coveting its vantage point
Wishes she could fly


A shadorma written for Colleen’s 24 Seasons Syllabic Poetry Challenge, No. 33. “Shadorma consists of a six-line stanza (or sestet). Each stanza is written as 3-5-3-3-7-5.”

I. J.’s Birds of the Week Invitation LXIII

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