Another road trip
Perhaps designed to escape
Bittersweet solace
Time and space for reflection
To find my heart remains home
W3 Prompt #141: Wea’ve Written Weekly poet of the week, Suzanne, prompts us to write a Japanese poetic form on the theme of Yutori.
I like the bittersweet feeling in your words–so much of life is like that. (K)
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Thank you, Kerfe! 😊
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I found myself subconsciously taken to the land of Oz with Dorothy, and ‘no place like home’. For me, your poem has a beautiful sense of belonging, physically and mentally, given all the space in the world, you know where you want, need, to be…. my interpretation of course….
💞Suzanne
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Thank you, Suzanne! 😊
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It’s beautiful Jennifer
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Thank you, Sadje! 😊
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You’re welcome
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How lovely. I love the connections to home, Jennifer.
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Thank you, Colleen!😊
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I love the thought of travel and adventure, yet there is no place like home. Beautifully written, Jennifer.
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Thank you, Eugi! 😊
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You’re most welcome, Jennifer.
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What a wonderful journey and a beautiful turn of phrase – thank you 😊
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Thank you, Ben! 😊
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Beautiful poem! I want road trip. Well shared
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Thank you! 😊
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Oh, I do like this, JJJ! Its wonderful. 👏
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Thank you, Lesley! 😊
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Such a thoughtful reflection, Jenn—love the sense of home you captured in this journey.
Much love,
David
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Thank you, David! 😊
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hi, Jenn 😁
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Sarah David, is now live:
Enjoy❣️
Much love,
David
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