Ain’t never wanted to live in the city
A country girl am I
All the sprawl is such a pity
Aches my heart and makes me cry
It ain’t so much the city folk
I find them quite alright
Irks me ‘bout the traffic though
Infernal ruckus day and night
Tore off to a meeting at the old Town Hall
To block what they call “development”
Told the investors they were in for a brawl
Those god-awful suits were hell bent
Oughtn’t repeat what next I had done
Oh, I reckon I stirred up a clamor
Obstruction, they cawed, as I made to run
Oafs had me thrown in the slammer
W3 Prompt #161: Wea’ve Written Weekly poet of the week, Violet, prompts us to: “Tell a story in verse—true or imagined, rooted in memory or invention… You can let the voice guiding the poem speak in a dialect.”
dVerse Poetry Form: Trolaan, hosted by Grace.
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This is so fun! I love it- and to think you did all this in form too? Amazing!
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Thank you, Violet! 😊
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I love the story and voice. Well done with the trolaan form. Wishing you a good weekend.
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Thank you, Grace! A good weekend to you as well.
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A lovely recitation of the story – even if the end result was more development and a police record!
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Thank you, Val! 😁
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You’re welcome!
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My friend, that’s a whole country ballad in a teacup! 🌾🎶
The rhyme’s got boots, grit, and a whole lotta heart. The city may build high, but it can’t match roots that run deep.
Keep that spirit strong—some lands grow crops, others grow courage. 🤠💚
Philo
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😁 Thank you, Philo!
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Welcome, my friend.
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Yes- a poem where I can “hear” the accent. Brilliant!
I tried to do that too!
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Thank you, Kim! 😊
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Wow, i loved this! made me smile. so much fun! thanks for sharing ❤
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Thank you! 😊
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“Oafs had me thrown in the slammer” made me laugh out loud—there’s so much grit and humor packed into that line. I love how the voice rolls like a front-porch yarn with a kick of rebellion, Jenn.
~David
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😁 Thank you, David!
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🤗
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hi, Jenn 😍
This week’s W3, hosted for the very first time by the amazing Bob Lynn, is now live:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2025/06/04/w3-prompt-162-weave-written-weekly/
Enjoy❣️
Much love,
David
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Excellent use of the form and a fun read. Well done. 👏
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Thank you! 😊
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